书城外语六级写作速成的秘密:3个月写出好成绩
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______?Perhaps each of us has our choice.

Some people think we should______.How can we______?Besides,______.

Some people,on the contrary,______.They think that______.Through______they can learn______;through______they can______.

In my opinion,we should______.By reading______,we can______.By reading______,we can______.Only in this way can we______.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30mins to write a short essay entitled Say No to Pirated Products.You should write at Least 150words following the outline given below:

1.目前盗版的现象比较严重

2.造成这种现象的原因及危害

3.我们应该怎么做

Useful words and expressions:

盗版:piracy(n.)

盗版产品:pirated products

知识产权:intellectual property rights

侵犯版权:infringe sb’s copyright;copyright infringement

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Say No to Pirated Products

As is known to all,piracy has become a more and more serious problem,which hinders our economic development.In many computers,we can find pirated Microsoft“Windows”software.In many DVD stores,we can see pirated products.

Why is there piracy?As far as I know,there are two reasons.To begin with,pirated products are much cheaper than legal ones.Take“Windows”as an example.The legal“Windows”software costs us thousands of yuan,while a pirated one costs only 5yuan.What‘s more,people don’t realize the harms of buying piratedproducts.When it comes to the harms of piracy,we can cite a lot.In the frst place,producing pirated products is similar to“theft”,which is illegal.In the second place,companies will be unwilling to create good products unless their intellectual property rights are well protected.

Serious as the problem seems,we can come up with some measures to deal with it.the government must make stricter laws to prevent people from producing pirated products.Then as consumers,we should be lawful citizens and refrain from buying them.Only through these measures can we hope to solve the problem.

妙语评析:本文是一篇非常典型的传统题型的文章:问题——解决型。它的典型展开方式为:问题是什么,原因,和解决办法。第一段的第一句话给出文章主题,然后用两个例子加以佐证。第二段有两项内容:原因和危害。所以分别给出主题句,并且每项内容给两个一级扩展句,下面还可以给若干二级扩展句。第三段同样在主题句后有两点展开,最后一句话做出总结。

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1.As is known to all,______

2.Why is there piracy?______

3.As far as I know,______

4.To begin with,______,What‘s more,______

6.In the frst place,______In the second place,______

7.Only through______can we______

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As is known to all,______,Why is there piracy?______

As far as I know,______To begin with,______,What’s more,______

In the first place,______In the second place,______Only through______can we______

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a short essay on the topic Starting Career in a Big City or Small Town?You should write at least 150words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1.很多的大学生毕业后留在大城市工作;

2.也有人选择到小城镇开始自己的职业生涯;

3.结合自己的实际情况谈谈自己的想法。

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Starting Career in a Big City or Small Town

Want to be a small fish in a big pond or the other way round?Every graduate faces this question when he starts his career.Some prefer to stay in the big cities after graduation.To them,big cities mean more experiences,more opportunities to see the big world and more space for career development.At the same time,higher salary is another temptation.

But some other graduates want to start in small towns.Even though there may not be many big companies,they can have a quieter and less competitive life.Another reason is they can be a big fish in a small pond.They can easily get the management‘s attention and may win promotion earlier.

As far as I am concerned,I prefer to start in a big city like Shanghai.A good begin is half the battle,and in Shanghai I can fnd a job in a big company where I can meet people from different places and cultures.I will learn from them what I can not get from textbooks.

妙语评析:这是一篇议论文,观点很明确。去大城市发展还是到小城镇工作。可以分段列明两者的优缺点,然后提出自己的看法。第一段写了在大城市发展的好处,第二段又写出在小城镇工作的好处,第三段提出个人看法。

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1、the other way round意为“与之相反”

2.Some prefer to______

3.To them______

4.At the same time,______

5.But some other______

6.Even though______they can______

7.Another reason is______

8.As far as I am concerned,I prefer to______

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Some prefer to______,To them______

At the same time,______,But some other______

Even though______they can______,Another reason is______

As far as I am concerned,I prefer to______

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a short essay on the topic Should one expect a reward when doing a good deed?You should write at least 150words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1.有的人认为应该有回报

2.另外的人认为应该像雷锋一样不要回报

3.我的看法

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Should one expect a reward when doing a good deed

The argument over whether we do good deeds for a reward is heated.Some argue strongly that great deeds deserve recognition and acclaim.In this selfsh and materialistic world,it is vitally important to recognize and promote various noble deeds.Rewarding and encouraging good deeds helps set an inspiring example to the public.

The opposing view is that we should perform good deeds without expectations of any outcomes or rewards.Acknowledgements and credit shouldn’t be given people who do good deeds with mixed motives.For example,some entrepreneurs supporting charity aims at tax reduction instead of lending a helping hand to others with a real motive.So we should do something good for others like Lei Feng without expectations of any economic and immaterial return.

From my perspective,doing good deeds in exchange for rewards isn‘t an offense.We merit them.In fact,receiving suffcient public praise and attention serves as a contributing force behind the widespread promotion of good values.A role model sometimes outweighs a sole good deed.

妙语评析:这篇议论文首先在第一句提出了所要议论的论点,然后就写了其中一种对此事的观点,第二段又写出另外一种与之对立的观点,最后在第三段,从自身的角度提出自己对这件事情的看法,进行总结。

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1.The argument over______

2.Some argue strongly that______

3.The opposing view is that______

4.For example,______