书城外语六级写作速成的秘密:3个月写出好成绩
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To be frank,I am rather disappointed at the food quality,price and service in the canteen.First,the dishes are scarcely well cooked and most of them taste the same.Secondly,most of the dishes there are priced so high that some students cannot even afford them.Thirdly,the service in the canteen is far from satisfying and the inside of the canteen always seem untidy.

To solve the problem,I suggest that another canteen should be built and a mechanism of competition will be introduced between the old and the new.Besides,both the canteens should be subject to the students’supervision.

Dining is an everyday issue for students.It may affect their academic performance.Therefore,I sincerely hope this letter can draw your attention to the matter and I hope the problems mentioned above can be solved as soon as possible.

Best regards.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

妙语评析:首先简明扼要地写出了这封信的核心内容,然后再进行详细介绍分析,第三段把自己对这件事的解决办法做了说明,最后一段提出自己的希望。

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1.To be frank,_____

2.First,_____Secondly,_____Thirdly,_____

3.To solve the problem,I suggest that_____Besides,_____Therefore,I sincerely hope_____

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Dear Mr·President,

I am_____To be frank,_____

First,_____Secondly,_____Thirdly,_____

To solve the problem,I suggest that_____Besides,_____Therefore,I sincerely hope_____

Best regards.

Yours sincerely

XXX

说明文15例

一命题形式要求

(1)对立观点式

两个事物或两个观点,让你任选其一。在试题中占30%。如:

who should be responsible for children‘s education,the school or the parents?give your opinion and tell the reasons.

(2)单一观点式

一个事物或一个观点,让你支持或反对。试题中常有do you agree or disagree的字样。在试题中占50%。如:

some people believe that children should engage in educational pursuits in their spare time,otherwise they are wasting their time.do you agree or disagree?

二模板作文赏析

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition onthe topic How to Succeed in a Job Interview?You should write at least 150words,and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:

1.面试在求职过程中的作用

2.取得面试成功的因素:仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是……

范文欣赏

How to Succeed in a Job Interview

Nowadays,in an ever tighter job market,great importance has been attached to an interview by both the employer and the applicant.The interview,so to speak,has become indispensable for getting a satisfactory job.On the one hand,the interviewer can take advantages of the occasion to learn about the candidates,such as their work experiences,education and their personalities,so as to pick out the right person for the company.On the other hand,the interviewee can make use of the opportunity to get to know the job he is going to take up,the salary,the working conditions and many other things about the job he is interested in.

Therefore,the job interview is very important to a job-hunter.But how can one succeed in it?Firstly of all,the interviewee must pay attention to his or her appearance.The first impression is always where we start.Get dressed properly and neatly.Secondly,good manners are equally important.Don’t be too proud,and neither too timid.Just be courteous.Thirdly,the interviewee must demonstrate his aptitude and skills for the job and his knowledge about the job-related areas.Be confdent.Last but not the least,the interviewee ought to be honest about his or her personal information as well as academic background,for honesty is the best policy.

To sum up,the job interview is indeed important,but there is no need to be nervous.As long as the interviewee has the ability for the job,with careful preparation and a fairly confdent and honest performance,his or her success can be ensured.

妙语评析:文章第一段从两个方面说明面试在求职中所起的作用,第二段介绍成功的面试应包括的主要因素,最后一段说明面试虽然很重要但也不必再紧张,只要认真准备正常发挥就能获得成功。

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1.great importance has been attached to_____by both_____and_____

2.On the one hand,_____such as_____so as to_____On the other hand,_____

3.Therefore,Firstly of all,Secondly,Thirdly,Last but not the least,

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Nowadays,_____great importance has been attached to_____by both_____and_____

On the one hand,_____such as_____so as to_____On the other hand,_____

Therefore,_____Firstly of all,_____Secondly,_____

Thirdly,_____Last but not the least,_____

To sum up,_____As long as_____

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The importance of self-confdence.You should write at least 150words

范文欣赏

The importance of self-confdence

Currently,self-confdence has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory——nothing is more valuable than self-confdence.

It is clear that self-confdence means trust in one‘s abilities.If you are full of self-confdence,it will bring your creative power to play,arouse your enthusiasm for work,and help you overcome diffculties,as a result,your dreams will come true.On the contrary,if you have no confdence in yourself,there is little possibility that you would ever achieve anything.Failure will be following with you。It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that self-confdence gives you light when you are in dark and encouragement when you are dismayed.You don’t have to look very far to find out the truth,in respect that we all know the secret of yourself.Curie lies in perseverance and self-confdence,the latter in particular.

It will exert a profound infuence upon the achievement of one‘s ambitions.With reference to my standpoint,I think he that can have self-confidence can have what he will.

妙语评析:这是篇说明自信心重要性的文章。第一段就先说明了自信心的重要性,第二段说明如果你拥有自信,它就能帮助你实现理想,然后又从反面说明如果你自信心不足,就会失败,而且自信心能在你遇到困难时给予你鼓励,最后一段说明只要你有信心就能做到你想做的事。

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1.Currently,_____has been the order of the day.

2.It is clear that_____as a result,_____

3.On the contrary,_____

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Topic

Currently,_____has been the order of the day.

It is clear that_____as a result,_____On the contrary,_____No one can deny another fact that_____