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第35章 模板作文赏析(16)

Actually,________A number of factors could account for the problem,but the following might be the critical ones.First,________Besides,________What‘s worse,________

In view of the seriousness of the problem,effective measures must be taken before things get worse.First,________Secondly,________With these measures taken,it is reasonable for us to expect a brighter future.______

谚语类10例

一常用句式模板

1.Have you ever thought of the famous proverb…….?

你有没有想……这个谚语?

2.To me,it is meaningful and signifcant in three respects.

对于我来说,在这三个方面它看起来很意味深长并且意义重大。

3.When we talk about the famous proverb…….

当我们讨论……这个有名谚语的时候。

4.We should not simply label it as right or wrong,but explore it in depth.

我们不能只是看表面来说明它是对是错,而是应该更深地去体味它。

5.The well-known proverb……has long been accepted by all of us.

这个众所周知的谚语……已经被我们所流传和受用。

6.As the proverb says……

正如……(谚语)所说。

常用主题内容模板

1.In the frst place,……In the second place,……Finally……

第一……,第二……,第三……

2.This proverb is especially true under several situations.First,……Second,……Third,……

这则谚语在很多情境下都是正确的。第一……,第二……,第三……

3.Let’s take……as an example.

让我们以……为例。

4.A case in point is……

一个例子为……

5.Nevertheless,there are some exceptions……

然而,还有很多例外……

常用结尾模板

1.We can learn a lot from this proverb and put it into practice——we should……

我们从中学到了很多并且应该应用到实践中去——我们应该……

2.In a word,we can draw the conclusion that……

总之我们得到结论是……

3.In certain circumstances,……..is the right choice

在特定的条件下,……是正确的选择

4.Judging from the examples given above,we may come to the conclusion that……

从以上的例子来看,我们可以得出……

二模板作文赏析

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes t o write a composition on the topic Haste Makes Waste.You should write at least 150words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.为什么说“欲速则不达”。

2.试举例说明。

范文欣赏

“Haste makes waste”is an English proverb which has equivalent expressions in many languages.It has become a precept whose value is universally accepted.

This proverb can be verifed by many other proverbs,“There is no royal road in learning”,“Rome was not built in a day”.Anyway it means that one should not be overanxious for quick results,otherwise he will fail.If one wants to be a scholar,he should make persistent efforts,burying himself in books.If he wants to take a shortcut,he will never become a scholar.If one wants to be president of a country,he should frst display his remarkable ability in his routine work so that his ability will be recognized and accepted by others.However,if he is impatient for success,he will never realize his goal.If a man courts a woman,he should try to win her love gradually.He should not expect to win her heart within a day,otherwise he will never get true love.

In conclusion,one should follow in order and advance step by step and should not be impatient for success,otherwise he will suffer a setback.

妙语评析:文章第一段先提出了这一谚语,在第二段解释其意思,列举很多例子说明“欲速则不达”的道理。第三段做出总结,要想成功我们应该循序渐进不应毫无耐心。

句型模板

1________is an English proverb which has equivalent expressions in many languages.

2.Anyway it means that________If one wants to be a________he should________If he wants to________he will never________

全文模板

Topic

________is an English proverb which has equivalent expressions in many languages.

Anyway it means that________If one wants to be a________he should________If he wants to________he will never________However,________

In conclusion,one should follow in order and advance step by step and should not be impatient for success,________

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes t o write a composition on the topic There Is No End to Learning.You should write at least 150words

范文欣赏

There Is No End to Learning

Aa soon as I was enrolled in college I reit a big burden off my mind.So did my classmates.We just wanted to relax.But at our first English lesson on how to improve our study the teacher told us,“There is no end to learning.You can only become a top student with additional work.”And she said hard work is rewarding.

The teacher‘s words awakened me.In fact everyone in the world is always learning.Man’s talents are like wild plants.They need cutting and pruning with the tool of learning,We learn not only inside the classroom but also outside the classroom.Learning is a process in which man adapts to his surroundings.It is driven by man‘s desire to win respect and to contribute to society.It is the curiosity for knowledge stimulated by knowledge itself.“To learn is to be young.Not to learn is to die.”This saying applies to every society and to all ages.

Indeed,everyone living on the earth is learning all the time.Man learns not only from books but also from his own experience.We can not hope that as long as we learn we will gain benefts.Effcient study is inseparable from good methods and motivation,A man of a strong sense of responsibility and full of ambition is insatiable in learning.

妙语评析:第一段先说明了自己是如何得知这一谚语的——英语课上老师的一句话。第二段写出了自己对这句话的理解,明白其深刻含义,最后一段说明其实每个人一生都在学习着。

句型模板

1.Aa soon as________In fact________

2.not only________but also________

3.Indeed,________all the time.

全文模板

Topic

Aa soon as________In fact________We lears not only but also________This saying applies to every society and to all ages.

Indeed,________all the time.We can not hope that as long as________

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes t o write a composition on the topic My mottos of Life.You should write at least 150words.