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In my opinion,I think it not advisable at all for me to drive a car to work.On the one hand,I cannot afford a car at the moment.On the other hand,the university isonly minutes away,and I take great delight in walking to and from work.To keep ft and stay healthy,I must seize every opportunity to participate in physical exercises.

妙语评析:文章先对图做了个简要说明,把它表达的数字和意义都列举出来。然后再详细阐述其原因,说明人们选择不同的上班方式是和工作有关系的。第三段又阐述自己在这方面的看法,把自己的原因分别做以说明。

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1.Seen from the chart,it can be concluded that________

2.It is no wonder that________

3.In my own practice,I think________

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Seen from the chart,it can be concluded that________

It is no wonder that________Less people________mainly because________

In my own practice,I think________On the one hand,________On the other hand,________

Directions:图表作文,关于一个美国大学图书馆的图书流动量(pop fction,general nonfction,science,art等),给出他们的流动比例对比,说明原因,并说明你自己喜欢阅读什么样的书。

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Reading Habits of American Students

From the table based on a survey we made of the reading preferences of students in an American university in 2012,we learnt that,of all kinds of books,contemporary university students like fictions best,which has 65.9percent of book circulation in library while other kins of books have low percentage:general nonfction——18.2%,science/technology/education-10.8%,art/literature/poetry——5.1%.

It suggests that contemporary students are much more easily infuenced by the fashion than ever before.It‘s a reasonable and good phenomenon because it reveals that university students like to keep up with the development of society.Thus they will easily adapt themselves into the new life after they graduate from school.

Generally,I like reading nonfctions,for it is tightly connected with the reality.To some degree,it’s no use reading too much fctions which sometimes will take you into fancy fantasy.Fast life pace also don‘t allow me to read books on art or poetry.To me,nonfction is even helpful in analyzing society and humanity.

妙语评析:第一段先把图表所显示出的变化趋势做简要概述,第二段详细阐述其表达的内容,说明这种变化是种好现象,最后一段以自己为例,说明写实文学对自己的帮助。

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1.From the table based on________we learnt that,________

2.It suggests that________

3.It’s a reasonable and good phenomenon because________

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From the table based on________we learnt that,________

It suggests that________It‘s a reasonable and good phenomenon because________

Generally,________To some degree,________To me,________

Directions:For this part you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition on the topic Statistics in People’s Daily Expenses in Xi‘an.You should write at least 150words and base your composition on the outline below:

1.Describe the changes indicated in the table.

2.The reasons for the change.

3.Make predictions about the future tendency.

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Statistics in People’s Daily Expenses in Xi‘an

What is shown in the table above indicates that dramatic changes have taken place in the daily expenses in Xi’an from 2000to 2010.The expenses on food have declined by 30%while those on clothing and recreation have increased respectively by 9%and 7%.

There are two factors accounting for these changes.In the frst place,the risen income resulting from economic growth plays a vital role in the less expense on food.In the second place,when food presents no worry to the average,people begin to focus more of their interest on handsome appearance and happy leisure time.As a result of such a shift,spending on clothing and recreation increases year by year.

From the analyses made above,with the further growth in economy and more changes in life style,the tendency indicated in the table will continue in the better direction.

妙语评析:第一段先总体概述了图表所表现出的内容,第二段分析导致这种变化的两种原因,说明人民收入的提高对食品的消费水平起到了重要作用,而且人们更多的关注娱乐消费。最后一段对上一段的分析做出总结。

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1.What is shown in the table above indicates that________

2.There are two factors accounting for these changes.In the frst place,________In the second place,________

3.As a result of such a shift,________

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What is shown in the table above indicates that________