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However,failure breeds success.On the one hand,success doesn‘t mean the absence of failures;it means the attainment of ultimate objectives.On the other hand,we can draw lessons and profts from failure.The season of failure is the best time for sowing the seeds of success.

When the unanticipated frustration comes,we must summon up all our courage to conquer it.Furthermore,we can gain from failures.We can steer ourselves through failures and embark on the road to success.

妙语评析:范文首先点出了在人生道路上会遇到很多的困难与失败,即失败是不可避免的。文章语言流畅,内容贴切,表意到位。

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1.Its more than a possibility.

2.On the one hand,_________.

3.On the other hand,_________.

4.Furthermore,_________.

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Topic

In the long life span,we will defnitely experience a wealth of setbacks.Its more than a possibility.It’s an inevitability._________will be on our life path.

However,______.On the one hand,________.On the other hand,_______.

When the unanticipated frustration comes,we must_____.Furthermore,______.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Variety Is the Spice of Life.You should write at least 150words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.大多数时候“变化是生活的调味品”是正确的

2.但也有例外的情况

3.结论

范文欣赏

Variety Is the Spice of Life

When we talk of the famous proverb“Variety is the spice of life”,we should not simply label it as right or wrong,but explore it in depth.

This proverb is especially true under several situations.First,all people enjoy colorful life and hate monotonous life-variety can make them more efficient and energetic.Second,new experiences always bring new ideas and feelings,which are vital for us to understand the essence of life.Third,if we ever want to improve ourselves,we should constantly change for the better by making new attempts.

Nevertheless,there are also some exceptions.Many things,in my belief,should be kept unchanged no matter how time fies.We should hold on to our dream if we ever want to turn it into reality.And we should always be loyal to our parents,partners and friends.

In a word,we can draw the conclusion that in most cases“variety is the spice of life”,but in certain circumstances,staying unchanged is the right choice.

妙语评析:第一段直接点出了“变化是生活的调味品”这一谚语。第二段分三点阐述了其正确性。首先,人们都喜欢多姿多彩的生活。其次,新的经历能给人们带来新的思想。另外,为了更好的生活,就要不断尝试新的东西。第三段分两点来说明了例外的情况。最后一段是给出结论,又呼应了主题。

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1.When we talk of the famous proverb_________,we should not simply label it as right or wrong,but explore it in depth.

2.This proverb is especially true under several situations.

3.Neertheless,there are also some exceptions.

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When we talk of the famous proverb_________,we should not simply label it as right or wrong,but explore it in depth.

This proverb is especially true under several situations.First,_________.Second,_________.Third,_________.

Nevertheless,there are also some exceptions._________.

In a word,we can draw the conclusion that in most cases_________,but in certain circumstances,_________the right choice.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Knowledge is power.You should write at least 150words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.为什么说“知识就是力量”?

2.举例说明

3.结论

范文欣赏

Knowledge is power

As a popular saying goes,knowledge is power.With our country developing fast,the importance of knowledge is becoming more and more obvious to us all.

In the very frst place,with knowledge,one can easily fnd jobs.It is often said that we are entering a new age of information,and knowledge plays a key role in this age.For example,if one wants to work in IT feld,one needs to improve his knowledge constantly.What‘s more,knowledgeable people can get quick promotion in their work.As is often the case,a person in charge of an organization is the one who has most knowledge.In addition,more knowledge is also needed to make our life rich and fulflled.

Accordingly,we must try hard to acquire as much knowledge as we can.Luckily,a lot of means may enable us to do so.Among other things,we prove the best and fastest way to get information.

妙语评析:根据提纲要求分为了三个部分,第一部分提出“知识就是力量”这一谚语,并指出知识很重要。第二部分以“工作”为例阐述了知识的作用,以及知识能为我们带来富足的生活。第三部分进行了总结,再一次点出知识就是力量,与主题相呼应。

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1.As a popular saying goes,_________.

2.With_________,the importance of_______is becoming more and more obvious to us all.

3.Accordingly,we must_________.

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As a popular saying goes,_________.With_________,the importance of_________is becoming more and more obvious to us all.

In the very first place,_________.For example,_________.What’s more,_________.In addition,_________.

Accordingly,we must_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic No Pains,No Gains.You should write at least 150words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.怎样理解“不劳无获”?

2.试举例说明

范文欣赏

No Pains,No Gains

The well-known proverb“No pains,no gains”has long been accepted by all of us.It tells us that we have to make strenuous efforts whenever we want to be successful in a certain feld.

Let‘s take English study as an example.If we want to improve our listening ability,we have to keep on listening to different materials and make records from time to time.It is also true with spoken English.Listening to teachers attentively in class and reading books are far from enough-you should practice talking with partners every week.

Another good case in point is acrobatics.Nobody is born a good acrobat,and one can only become a skilled one after countless failures.All of us feel excited when they win grand prizes in international competitions,but who knows how many hardships they have endured?