书城外语六级写作速成的秘密:3个月写出好成绩
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第38章 模板作文赏析(19)

Judging from the examples given above,we may safely come to the conclusion that no pains,no gains.So why not try our best to learn our specialty well?I am sure we will become experienced and skillful if we never give up.

妙语评析:范文文章主题突出,内容完整,语言优美,用词准确,连贯性很强。

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1.The well-known proverb_________has long been accepted by all of us.

2.It tells us that_________.

3.Let’s take_________as an example.

4.Another good case in point is_________.

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The well-known proverb_________has long been accepted by all of us.It tells us that_________.

Let‘s take_________as an example._________.

Another good case in point is_________._________.

Judging from the examples given above,we may safely come to the conclusion that_________.So why not_________?

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Money makes the mare go.You should write at least 150words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.钱是万能的吗?

2.人们各有不同看法

3.你的观点

范文欣赏

Money makes the mare go

As the saying goes,“Money makes the mare go”,but there are many things we can’t buy with money,such as time and true love.

What is money?To this question,different people hold differently.Some think money is the source of happiness,while some regard it as the root of all evils.Asfar as I am concerned,they both have their reasons.Those who consider money as the source of happiness argue that money means massive house,beautiful clothes,or luxurious cars,and can enable them and their families live comfortably.They even believe that money can bring power,friendship,and love.But due to the temptation of money,there are many people who become thieves,robbers,or murderers.For example,it is also out of the greed for money that some offcials forget their duty and cause enormous losses to the country,so some people think that money is the root of all evil and suggest that we keep away from money.

In fact,money is merely a medium of exchange.It may bring you happiness;it may lead you to a life of crime.Whether it is good or bad depends on how it is used.

妙语评析:文章中心明确,语言优美,结构清晰,用词准确。

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1.As the saying goes,_________,but there are_________,such as_________.

2.To this question,different people hold differently.

3.Those who_________argue that_________.

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As the saying goes,_________,but there are_________,such as_________.

What is_________?To this question,different people hold differently.Some think_________,while some_________.As far as I am concerned,they both have their reasons.Those who_________argue that_________.They even believe that_________.But_________,there are many people who_________.For example,_________,so some people think that_________.

In fact,_________.It may_________;it may_________.Whether it is good or bad depends on how it is used.

图表类8例

一图表类写作概述

图表类写作必须用自己的文字写一篇完整的文章表达。你最少要写150字。你不用给任何意见做任何假设或做结论。

题目提供给你的资料会用以下其中一种方式出现:

一幅图画(a graph)

圆图或柱图(pie chart or bar chart)

图表内有一些资料(table of information)

一程序或步骤图(diagram of stages of processor procedure)

一连串事情的经过(sequence of events)

说明书(表)(picture of an object showing how it works)

题目可能是一样以上的图表,题目有时不会特别说明,但都需要做一些资料的比较。在正式回答之前,用一两分钟弄清楚现有的资料和题目的要求。

二模板作文赏析

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a short essay entitled The Declining Employment Rate of University Graduates You should write at least 150words based on the chart and outline given below:

1.近几年来大学毕业生就业率越来越低;

2.产生这种现象的原因;

3.我们大学生应该怎么做?

范文欣赏

The Declining Employment Rate of University Graduates

The employment rate of university graduates is declining nowadays.Reading this chart,we can fnd that the employment rate of university graduates has declined gradually.It declined from 80percent in 2008to nearly 75percent in 2010,and fnally,the rate dropped to no more than 70percent in 2012.

Obviously,it is increasingly diffcult for a university graduate to fnd a job today.

The reasons for this are various.For one thing,the number of university graduates is increasing every year,while the job vacancies for them have not increased in accordance.For another,many graduates want to fnd a well-paid and comfortable job,which is always not practical.Finally,many employers think that the students who have just left from university are in lack of working experience,instead they are more willing to hire the experienced.

Therefore,as university students,in order to find a job after graduation,we should be more practical,and not only learn as much knowledge as possible,but also take all kinds of opportunities to gain working experience.

妙语评析:文章先在第一段点明所要论述的现象,以及这一现象近年来的变化趋势,第二段论述了产生这一现象的原因,最后在第三段,以大学生的身份对待此事,表明态度。

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1.The________rate of________is declining nowadays

2.we can fnd that________

3.It declined from________percent in________to nearly________percent in________,and fnally,________

4.Obviously,________

5.The reasons for this are various.

6.For one thing,________For another,________Finally,________

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Topic

The________rate of________is declining nowadays,we can fnd that________,It declined from________percent in________to nearly________percent in________,and fnally,________

Obviously,________The reasons for this are various.

For one thing,________For another,________Finally,________Therefore,

Directions:Write an essay of 150—200words based on the following bar chart.In your essay,you should frst describe the bar chart,then interpret its meaning,and give your comment on it.

范文欣赏

Psychological problems of university students

As is apparently betrayed in the bar chart above,at present university students suffer from psychological problems of various kinds,among which spiritual depression,miscellaneous problems,and suicide-committing top the list.What the chart reveals is indeed thought-provoking.